Journeys End Comments

a beautiful inspired poem.

you compose well-adjusted syllable-timed lines, every line is so poetic by form, meter and theme! ! ! ! ! !

Hmmm... Reminds me of my poem Scared Of Death To Death, ... Everything jst happens sudden, but its glorious if u end up wit God....hmmm. Splendid again, like dis more. ~TT~

like this me seems it is a supplication well writ lonvin too thank u

In God's holy embrace of mankind, And to lovingly mind, In a new land that is journeys end, We will find our celestial peace when our torn emotions will mend.- - - - - - - Unbelievable! Beautiful!

A beautiful inspirational poem. Have a read of my What Love, its similar in a way.

the world is sudden. everything is constantly changing. good poem.

Beautiful poem Hazel, very inspired.

In search of celestial peace . I like it. thanks.