Friday, June 15, 2018

Journey Towards Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Passing through cave of dusk,
Day has gone, night has gone,
Day has taken turn in nice way,
Dispersed by clouds and light,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 June 2018

A beautiful poem sir! Loved reading it...10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 June 2018

A very beautiful dawn with a lovely snap of dawn we all ought to adorn At least I do great KM are you

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Muzahidul Reza 15 June 2018

Sounds spiritual that humans are concerned modern human world is keeping in deep darkness they should try and start to set out to dawn, excelently write thanks for sharing

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Rini Shibu 15 June 2018

Beautiful poem about the dawn

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Robert Murray Smith 15 June 2018

Eating up the road we move along.++10

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Bill Cantrell 15 June 2018

A beatiful poem, there are so many phrases in this poem that stand out brilliantly, so far in horizon this has told...weather is smiling in confusion...Dawn invites day to work with sun...trees in calmness kiss time, all these things bows in humility to the eternal dawn, a great poem! ! !

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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