Journey To Betterment Comments

Piew Dutta! Wonderful poem....!

Nature controls our mood. We are in search of a 'secret key' to become master of self. Nice poem 10.

Excellent write, Piew...continue writing with such insight and depth. I like it...Just one small suggestion though, bring more coherence into your work...thanks

I thought this very provoking like someone hidden within the depths of her own. Thank you for reading my poem and commenting - shobana

Dawn starts with monsoon rain....feelings overwhelm the poetess......she starts her game with pen and paper.....the magic.......a hypnotic poem by you.....

The landscape you have painted of a monsoon dawn is amazing. Its shows your talent and flair of writing great poems. Keep inking.