Sunday, May 11, 2014

Journey Through The Sunrise Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the first glimpse of light,
The first breath of air,
The first echo of sound,
You were there from the start.
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Htetmyet Ne' Ye'
COMMENTS
F J Thomas 11 June 2014

It is quite beautiful Htetmyet; the title pulls you in. I was not able to read it right away as this site seems to have many glitches since I've come and many poems weren't showing

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Kyai Myint 12 May 2014

Very touching poem! ! !

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Bill Cantrell 11 May 2014

A good write, I enjoy it when a poem is like a journey, well written.

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