Tuesday, October 21, 2008

Journey Of Tear Comments

Rating: 5.0

From an eye a tear just shed
Traveling through the mist
To sleep in earthly bed
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COMMENTS
Tarun Sharma 07 November 2008

i found the journey straight from heart! rgds

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 01 November 2008

marvellous aijaz...im impressed greatly by what youve accomplished here...it is indeed very very well formed....well done aijaz..standing ovation.10!

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Iram Jamil 31 October 2008

O poet i m sorry 4 i m 2 l8 2 reply u had captured the precious feelings of mines gr8 job

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Kesav Easwaran 26 October 2008

the journey of a 'poem tear'...though sadly emotional the journey is for peace to eternity...good piece

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Shiza Khan 25 October 2008

very emotional.. anyone can feel it.. truly expressed

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Egi David Perdana 25 October 2008

it's simply the best for you, a piece of the peace, colourfull and great for you

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Ashraful Musaddeq 22 October 2008

Sweet and sour, the journey of reading. 10 with love.

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Dr Kamran Haider 22 October 2008

Tears are essential part of life and as life moves tears come along... Again a wonderful piece, well crafted and adorned with purity of tormented emotions... Regards, Kamran

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Ency Bearis 22 October 2008

tears has defiant meaning joy/sad...emotionally that could be..in other things might be differently...a mind boggling sometimes...nice concept..A10 Ency Bearis

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C T Heart 21 October 2008

Tears are words of emotions...sadness and loneliness were magically penned in the earth's crust, digging into the core...a 10.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 21 October 2008

Fine imagery penned! truely a piece of art! ......10+

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