Journey Of Stones Comments

Nice poem. :) sure an inspirer.

lovely poem Tiwari ji It has a message and encouragement. read my poems if you find time and tell me something about them. Thanks

it was long but it was very good. keep up the good work. really inspirational! ! ! xc excellent

Lovely poem///Interesting write.

nice poem, very thought-provoking.

This is an amazing write Vivek with a great moral and message! ..... A tedious tale of two stones told with great skill and poetic elan! ! I ran, I ran, I suffered the pain And at last I have had this Gain.....Yes, at the end of every struggle and strain, there lies a gain! Gladly I award you a 10

This poem has a good lesson that recites the thought where is the will there is the way. The use of Hindi words enhances the poem`s sense of sublimity. The two stones teach all of us a good lesson of life. The last stanza is superb in its philosophy.

very nice poem with right slection of rhythems truely impressed...please come to my page, i need your comments

wonderful poem, written in a bautiful nd ineresting pattern........... with awessomme rhyming scheme......well done bhaiya... surely 10 on 10.........

a wonderful poem...........written in an interesting pattern with awssomme rhyyyyminggg scheme............ hatsssss offffff.............. well done bhaiya sam surely 10 on 10.......

wow... truly breathtaking, i myself lived in kashi for a long time and loved your way of describing the temple the images all came back to me.. =) well done! !