Journey Of A Small Boy Comments

An absolutely wonderful poem with many profound memories to cherish. Those paddy fields, harvest songs, water snakes are no more to be seen or heard.

The poet's recollections of his childhood. He was as free as a bird enjoying the beautiful and mighty creations of God dwelling on mother earth! ! A sparkling picture of nature with elegant imagery is presented in the poem. Thanks DPN.

You have brought alive all those village scenes which as a child I too enjoyed! The potter couple you have described in such a way that i feel you have granted rebirth to the same couple I used to see often on my way to the school! Enjoyed this lovely poem that has aroused in me a lot of nostalgic memories! Top marks!

The scenic beauty of nature that marvels a child has been brilliantly expressed in this poem.In a village surrounding, plants, animals, birds and humans coexist peacefully - - -Their life is melodious in spite of hardship. Let me quote- - Little sparrows were busy storing rice for off-season In the newly made nests hung from coconut leaves They cheerfully chirped and perched, sung and danced I wished I were a sparrow to fly high and live in a nest

, This is a beautiful poem on nature and journey having touching expression and nice collocation. I love much the lines stated below. Potters and potter's wheel, dedication and devotion Above all, love of God for the less cared and helpless