Thursday, January 17, 2019

Journey Of A Crescent To A Full Moon Comments

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When she intended to have a rose in her silky hairs
I don't know who brought her silent desire in my heart
I don't know why I plucked a pink rose.
And I don't' know how I got courage to add pink colour
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Edward Kofi Louis 06 February 2019

For beauty! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Savita Tyagi 23 January 2019

Such a lovely poem of pure love and beauty. Always a pleasure to read your poems.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 18 January 2019

Love in the poem is lovely! I really loved to read such a wonderful and melodious poem. Beautiful poem, dear sir! You may like to read my poem The Wind: An Extreme Instance Thank you!

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 January 2019

A human smile is precious than the pearls! love it within love

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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2019

Very well thought love song. The reason behind the crescent moon turning to full moon nicely explained in terms of love. A smile, a thanks and a gratitude is good enough to understand the love between the two souls. Awesome Janab....100+

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