Friday, November 2, 2007

Journey Of A Body Comments

Rating: 4.7

When I fell
My mother wept for
The big boulder
Hit me on the head;
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rajagopal haran
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Arka Chattopadhyay 21 November 2007

I'm reminded of Lawrence's poems on his mother... The most fundamental relationship.The most fundamental loss.

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Aigis Nalian 20 November 2007

you do have a positive talent for bringing out deep thoughts through easily identifiable words in a pleasing yet thought provoking way.. good!

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Sylvia Prinsloo 20 November 2007

Very very heartwarming - reminds me of the time when i was small and my brother jabed a gardenfork through my toes - my mother conforted me and assured me that she loved me and everything will get better Sylvia

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Janice Windle 08 November 2007

Someone once said that all art is about life, birth and death. This is certainly art - moving and emotionally direct. Excellent.

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Ewigi Liebe 06 November 2007

This one is great fine written, keep up the good work.

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Ana Monnar 04 November 2007

Your poem sounds sincere and heart-felt. : -))

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Body is a mortal part of the whole. This is very thoughtful write Rajagopal. Thank you for sharing :)

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