(journey Inwards) Nightmare Comments

Brrr, the nightmares are like abandoned babies of our mind who come back to us already grown up sometimes at night. The words, the images, you used are suggesting anxiety. Very good work.

The 'clot of black night' did it for me too! Nail-biting tension is built in such a short space, and oh, the relief of the closing lines. A tantalizing read! S :)

well, I've just discovered another fine poet at this site thanks poemhunter for this great venue, I'll be checking out more of your poems Janice, please send me a message when you post something new

'A clot of black night over there' did it for me. Your images are vivid and I must say I was wondering what would happen next. Apparently, I screamed in my sleep last night! The happy ending was a nice relief. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson

That late toasted cheese supper has a lot to answer for Janice.Still you awoke protected and safe......Nice work... Sid.

Well done, young lady...Mellifluous movement..resplendent imagework...Solid penning... F j R (09)