(journey Inwards Collection) .... On The Surface Comments

...Here on the surface my lungs are thick, my arteries cauterised by the fire of unavoidable fear. My safety route is closed.... These lines I like very much. Here the reader feels the smoke by himself...beautiful piece dressed with stanzas resonant *10*

Nice poem Madam. I enjoyed reading it.

Introspection in its finest hour! An exemplary effort.......

Nothing superficial here J... and absolute heart-wrencher. So insightful and eloquent. t x