In this enchanted place
My soul
Sheds its carapace,
Sloughs off the brittle skin
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How wonderful that you have found a place to truly be yourself, without the constraints of earthly tethers, Jan. You've described this 'feeling' so well. Love, Fran xxx
Oh Jan, I understand these feelings so very well. You've written some blinding lines in her, esp. like the part about flaying your senses. The soul laid bare and allowing itself the pleasure of sweetness and pain, all at once we understand what it is truly like to feel alive.... Wonderfully crafted piece of poetry. HG: -) xx