Friday, December 28, 2007

(journey Inwards Collection) ....Greener Grass (Men That I Shall Never Meet) Comments

Rating: 4.8

So many men that I shall never meet.
Eyes that will never lock with mine
an instant, in a glance that says
that I've existed just a moment
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Janice Windle
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Alison Cassidy 11 January 2008

A contemplative piece that shares personal disappointment with well chosen words. Never overly sentimental though, which makes your angst very moving. And you never know, there are probably many who see you in the same way you view them, but don't have the nerve to say 'hello'. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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R H 05 January 2008

A serious bit of contemplation going on here - flowing and thought provoking. Have to agree with tara though...justine xx

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Hey... when you write like this, and look like that, it's got to be their loss..... t x

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There was a time when I was on line with someone and I strongly believed I would correspond only with one guy who had few accounts in my opinion... I will repeat that again - on line dating doesn't do any good to any body. If I'm reviewing somebody's poems I do it for the quality of the work. I still love poetry :)

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Roger Cornish 28 December 2007

Men! ! ! ! With.... BO... Men...with all their mucky laundry! Not to mention all their IRONING Men...smelly socks! Beer Breath! Men! Men! Men! Ain't ya had your..... Fill? ? ?

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Ivan Donn Carswell 28 December 2007

Janice, we have this to contend with: '...whom I'll never meet, / and who will never meet with me... ' but rest assured, good poetry makes things happen in diverse way! Rgds, Ivan

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