Sunday, August 10, 2008

(journey Inwards Collection) .... Epiphany In Taormina Comments

Rating: 5.0

Their last day.
Ten ordered days of
breakfast at nine
on the terrazzo.
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Janice Windle
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Roger Cornish 11 August 2008

Absolutly fantastic! ! ! Love the structure in this, the wonderful imagery and the depth of your message. The pace is accentuated, chases us through the poem by the use of 'And' in these stanzas: 'And now at last a look at Taormina. And she loves the little town Above the sparkling bay. And it’s not that she’s not grateful to the man who has made all of this possible. And it’s not that she doesn’t recognise that without him she might never have seen...' Wonderful Jan, and quite different from you? Rx

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