Tuesday, January 22, 2008

(journey Inwards Collection) .... A Secret Comments

Rating: 5.0

I took it to the father of all wisdom.
He gave me advice.
I took the advice
to the mother of all love
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Janice Windle
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Roger Cornish 28 January 2008

I may just be the Father of all wisdom......... but perhaps not! Maybe the Son of all Sin! Lol. Great Poem Jan! RogerXx

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Original Unknown Girl 28 January 2008

Jan, I like what you did here.... I wonder too what the ending was, perhaps it was similar to mine? Who'll ever know! But still... the poem says enough to captivate the reader and that's what makes it a good poem. HG: -) xx

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Alison Cassidy 23 January 2008

This has all the elements of a children's picture book story. And all the enchantment too. Beware the gossips. Treasure what you have. Superb penning. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Fred Babbin 22 January 2008

This one has a certain warmth.

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