I took it to the father of all wisdom.
He gave me advice.
I took the advice
to the mother of all love
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Jan, I like what you did here.... I wonder too what the ending was, perhaps it was similar to mine? Who'll ever know! But still... the poem says enough to captivate the reader and that's what makes it a good poem. HG: -) xx
This has all the elements of a children's picture book story. And all the enchantment too. Beware the gossips. Treasure what you have. Superb penning. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I may just be the Father of all wisdom......... but perhaps not! Maybe the Son of all Sin! Lol. Great Poem Jan! RogerXx