Tuesday, May 17, 2016

Journey From Future To Past Comments

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I walked all day
collecting pebbles of the road,
to find me facing a blind lane.
I possess the future at the moment.
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Sumit Ganguly
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Kelly Kurt 17 May 2016

I interpreted this as waking from a coma after nearly dying and being a changed man, both physically and psychologically. Wonderfully written, Sumit

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Sumit Ganguly 18 May 2016

Thank you, Kelly.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 17 May 2016

Past and future are amalgamated. Now a gender free man I am tossing time and sense all day. Beautiful lines.10 for it. Thanks Subhas.

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Sumit Ganguly 18 May 2016

Thank you, Subhas.

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