Sunday, October 2, 2016

Journey By Bus Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Point Pedro bus is not for us,
It suits a hippopotamus.
The Mannar bus is slow and meant
For an ox or elephant.
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Seamus O Brian 14 November 2016

Haha! A delightful journey, whimsical and adventurous. I love the pace of the writing, it matches the break-neck speed of the determined driver. Wonderful piece of writing, my friend!

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Julie Smith 03 October 2016

A fun poem, enjoyed reading it! :)

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Raymond Farrell 03 October 2016

I'm glad you got there in one piece. Entertaining to read.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 October 2016

To shake and rattle! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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