Monday, August 8, 2011

Journey Comments

Rating: 4.4

Life is a journey and the path unwinds
Before you a single road that fades out
Into…a distance. A glow shimmering light
Spills onto the path, now a footpath, now
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Hirushi Jayasekera
COMMENTS
David Harris 14 August 2011

A wonderful journey with lots of imagery. Thank you for sharing it with us. David

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Hiru Jay 09 August 2011

Thank you soo much! I really appreciate your comments. Glad you enjoyed it! I did read your poem called 'A journey', its really good (also left some comments behind) . I don't know why the elipses in this poem appear as weird symbols. Do you know why that happens? In case you didn't notice, this particular poem is in iambic pentameter as well...its the only one for the moment. Thanks again! !

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Romeo Della Valle 08 August 2011

Wow! Hirushi! What an impressive, well penned and poignant poem! I love its rich imagery and fine texture! Brilliant that all I can say! Obviously, you are in the right field since Poetry runs in you blood as far as I can see! 10+++ Well deserved! Keep inspiring the World with your talented writes! If time permits, please, read and I hope you enjoy my poem titled: A JOURNEY! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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