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beautiful write............loved the metaphors.............

dreams while sleeping is oftentime fades..while dreams with hope could be turn to reality...naizz

Dream needs no reason, yet a lost dream do hurt Each line is very impressively framed The reader is brought down to feel the lost state. Enjoyed the word flow. Thank you.

Dreams take births and die through out in human life...losing them out helps sprouting more and more dreams in the aging twigs of life...good poem, Vidyadhar...with ample similies inside...10

this is a real good poem

Sometimes in life dreams do seem lost, however in such moments an individual should try to remember the brighter memories and continue to live on life. Dreams are never lost until one gives up. I liked the usage of words in this poem of yours.

this is a great description bout lost dreams...you put into words the picture on how lost dreams are to be found...nice idea, , nice piece too, , naizz

Exquisite composition written, well crafted in a thought provoking verses...touching lines in great imagery..............10

quite a expressive poem sir.......little sad but poetic...10