Saturday, April 3, 2010

~~journey~~ Comments

Rating: 3.0

I am in the middle of my journey
With the heavy basket behind
full with have and haven't
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Raju Baruah
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Aastha Uppal 21 April 2010

journey without the bag of have and have nots is a futile one..its the chaos and ordeal which keep us on our toes to reach a non existing state of rest thats without chaos.. nicely framed! !

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 12 April 2010

‘Chaos’ and ‘Mist of Faith’…a poetically pessimistic/optimistic attitude…what poets always are… ‘…To reach the unknown end of distress’ Here lies your skill here again in Lows…by ‘Unknown’…enjoyed … Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Rinki Nandy 12 April 2010

maybe you should have named it 'life' coz the contents actually match up with an average life an average humankind.

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Alyssa Lippi 09 April 2010

very good. passionate.

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Theresa Walker 09 April 2010

GOOD GOD BLESS YOU I CAN APPLY THAT TO MY EVERYDAY LIFE

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Theresa Walker 09 April 2010

GOOD GOD BLESS YOU I CAN APPLY THAT TO MY EVERYDAY LIFE

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Pranab K Chakraborty 09 April 2010

Can't untie the tag Just running Through this ordeal of chaos Through the mist of faith To reach the unknown end of distress. ........ well poet your cry is too loud. we are also in the same journey poet. stand straight and face all the hazards of life as a man who can touch the cry of others. Write more poet, Live long

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Bryandominic Chidiebere 08 April 2010

Have and have'nt can't go. Never would'nt I! . A nice one', keep it up.

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Bryandominic Chidiebere 08 April 2010

Have and have'nt can't go. Never would'nt I! . A nice one', keep it up.

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Anju Addanki 06 April 2010

Yes very true u need to leave sorrows behind and walk ahead. good one.

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Rehana Nazli 05 April 2010

Sometimes it is good to think of off loading the baskets of burdens off your shoulders and breath the freshness in the air of your journey. Let go!

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Raju Baruah

Raju Baruah

Jhanji, Jorhat, Assam, India
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