Monday, April 7, 2008

Journey Comments

Rating: 5.0

Little bird spread its wings
looking at the horizon
wanting eagerly to touch
the blue's of the sky.
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Deepti Agarwal
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Vinod Ak 09 April 2009

Very well written.Superb expression!

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Shaffras Mahamoor 21 January 2009

u know what life is my dear poet.. great. i enjoyed it..

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Mula Veereswara Rao 08 May 2008

It's journey to mystic. Nicely written.

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Kesav Easwaran 16 April 2008

yes... all of us fly towards west... to our 'set'... first unknowingly...and knowingly once set is sighted... the flight to sun and to sun set! a good theme, well unscreened

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