Monday, March 19, 2007

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You carried your smile that day
Over wild-shifting shingle
Which felt your unfinished hand
Dig to feel new-cold damp-smooth textures.
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Alan Dolan
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Angelic Warrior 19 June 2009

what a day dream :) ...nice.....10...

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Greenwolfe 1962 28 September 2008

This is one of those where I must ask the question, why? People write for all kinds of reasons. Some are obvious. Some are obscure. Some, like this one, may never be known. GW62

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Eastlandah David 30 October 2007

so reflective of what we are.have to go through. In life and in love. amazing piece

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Eastlandah David 30 October 2007

so reflective of what we are.have to go through. In life and in love. amazing piece

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Declan McHenry 19 March 2007

Alan, a finely crafted piece indeed. Neatly done.

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