Jonas Brothers - I Comments

This is not written very well at all. Placement of lines and structure is completely off. I can see potential in the writer, but life is to short to write about stupid things. If your want to write, no matter what reason you have, then write about something worthwhile that is relevant in our society. If you write about rape and suicide and anorexia, and homosexuals, then you will be a writer. Open up to what is actually happening if you truly want to write; nobody cares about the Jonas brothers.

So I can't forgive you for your crime The punishment won't end this time 'Cause now we're done, it's finally over And this hurt will fade in time itis all the way jonathan brotehres play.. good write with oen central views...