Sunday, October 2, 2016

Jonah's Journey Comments

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We are talking about a little book in the Bible;
The book of Jonah, just three pages long.
There are seven miraculous events in that book.
Others say ten - well, neither is wrong!
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Bri Edwards 06 October 2016

He had paid his fare to Tarshish, and caused loss to the ship, ..............well, perhaps God had a hand in it also! i no longer believe in God or Bible stories, but i try to be open-minded. IF God really does/did exist, then ANYTHING is believable. i just read the Poet's Notes before going back to finish reading the poem. i'll be on the lookout for the alleged humourous style; i haven't noticed it yet. ok, i see a bit of humor now. ;) :) and i see a bit of rhyming. two of my favorite poetic conditions are humor and rhyming. thanks. hey! forty days! sounds a lot like some other guy in the bible; someone who built a BIG boat! let's see.................hmm? ..............Ned, Nestor, Nick, Nancy? Nah! bri :)

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Tom Billsborough 03 October 2016

Certainly a whale of a time for Jonah. Very entertaining story!

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 October 2016

Searching from the works of the BIBLE. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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