Friday, September 7, 2007

Jolly Good Show(For Lyn) Comments

Rating: 5.0

All day
stuck up this bloody tree
in the middle of bloody nowhere.
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Dónall Dempsey
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Elysabeth Faslund 07 September 2007

When did you decide to take the reader with you? I really wanted to answer that radio! ! You've got the readers firmly in hand with this, and that's the highest praise I can give...except...DAMN! ! ! GREAT! ! ! xxxElysabeth

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Scarlett Treat 07 September 2007

This is one poem that, for me, breaks the war down into a killing field, and yet shows the humanity of each of the men here, the killed...and the killer. Awesome write.

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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