All day
stuck up this bloody tree
in the middle of bloody nowhere.
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This is one poem that, for me, breaks the war down into a killing field, and yet shows the humanity of each of the men here, the killed...and the killer. Awesome write.
When did you decide to take the reader with you? I really wanted to answer that radio! ! You've got the readers firmly in hand with this, and that's the highest praise I can give...except...DAMN! ! ! GREAT! ! ! xxxElysabeth