Monday, February 26, 2018

Jollification Comments

Rating: 5.0

Jackpot is got when luck is favourable
JackFrost of sorrow goes vanished ever
Jell your actions in right forms
Jettison wrath, greed and violence
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Edward Kofi Louis 12 April 2018

Join hands with the truth! ! Facing the ways of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Jeanette Telusma 27 February 2018

This is such a fun poem... I believe you must have enjoyed each thought as you wrote. A fantastic 10++++++

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Paul Brookes 27 February 2018

Enjoyed this jolly jape Great word play enjoyed

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 27 February 2018

Excellent use of the word J, more importantly, with a beautiful message of denouncing wrath, greed and violence.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 February 2018

A healthy universal message of peace, we can change our fortune with hard and sincere working.

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Michael Walker 26 February 2018

I do jog most days, one reason that I feel jolly most of the time. I do not gamble after I never struck the jackpot. A thought-provoking poem indeed.

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Rini Shibu 26 February 2018

Wonderful poem with nice message using J Rini

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 February 2018

It's an amazing short poem carrying a precious message! Thanks dear sir for sharing! .......10

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Nudershada Cabanes 26 February 2018

Wonderful use of alliteration. Well crafted poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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