Thursday, June 18, 2015

Joker's One Way Train Comments

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Joker's One Way Train

Smilingly hidden cloaked in time's unforgiving shadow
While the coaches rush further, more hours to swallow
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Arno Le Roux
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Arno Le Roux 12 May 2017

Thank you for your valuable time and kind words.

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Roseann Shawiak 03 July 2015

Very wise and thoughtful insight in your poem. great rhythmic rhyming all the way through it! I love your ending line: Ask first how long the ride to success will be Ask how many minutes with dear ones you will not see........ A very poignant thought, an important one in life. Great poem! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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