Monday, May 4, 2009

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Confusion like the clown climbing
to reach the fun
Children laughing
because of pity
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travel Confusion
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Kamil Michnicki 04 May 2009

It's a good concept for a poem. I didn't like the last few lines. Actually I think I really like the first two lines of the first two stanzas and the first 3 lines of the last stanza. It would actually be a good poem with just those lines.

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