Join The Army Comments

Great piece...full of very strong imagery...powerful and moving. Well done! Hugs, Dee

This poem is very powerful and very visual. I would imagine that it could only be written by someone who has experienced it first hand.

Dont join the Army! Good poem though! I liked it a lot. Anyways the Army will ruin your life and cause you lot's of pain. Take it from me I would know! Kevin

wonderful writing, Willow. Well done...