Friday, September 12, 2008

Join Me In The Grave Comments

Rating: 5.0

crawl inside scratch and tear
untill im broken beyond repair
cut me down a second time
kidnape, rape, and leave behind
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sabrina burton
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Emily Oldham 03 November 2008

brilliant poem........... keep writing Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 September 2008

Ammmmazing compact composition..........10

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Yasser Koor 13 September 2008

it is great poem.. u used a good and strong words.. i like this kind of writing.....

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Ameer Mcarthur 13 September 2008

Fatal love indeed? Yeahhhhh....do whatever you want in that hole! Amazing.

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Thomas Viruvelil 13 September 2008

lover may not join you in grave even you will not join him in grave Love is something good that come on your way occassionally but not always Hold and kiss and hug it when it comes because tomorrow it may not come on your way

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