Monday, March 10, 2008

Johnny's Gun Comments

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A book we read in class one summer
when summer sun and crack of bat
distracted us from assigned reading
and the discussions we held indoors
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Michael Pruchnicki
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Greenwolfe 1962 22 March 2008

Except for the title, which is deceiving, this is a finely written piece of prose that could be expanded and enhanced extensively. I don't find anything to criticise in the writing. The message is clear; which is, by far, the most important thing. This is tho only piece of yours that I have read, I will have to read more. GW62

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Flora Gillingham 10 March 2008

Two aspects nicely worked together.

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