Saturday, June 13, 2020

Johnny Angel: Demon For Hire.Chapter 4.Part 1 Of 5. The Blood Witches Of Bavaria. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Damn he's still good! One minute nothing,
Then in sparse woodland he steps out.
And so quick too this destroyer of Valac,
In their War In Heaven duelling bout...
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Shaun Cronick
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Shaun Cronick 20 June 2020

There is a longer written version of the interaction between Johnny and Gabriel and one day I might put the whole version up all 5 parts in one poem. Each part has more exposition verses but slows down the pacing. So I cut them out so the pace tightens and is relentless. So maybe one day when it doesn't time out I'll put said version up.

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Dominic Windram 13 June 2020

Wow...this is such an outstanding poem Shaun! It seems to draw deeply from rich biblical themes, mythology and comic book heroes/ villains yet puts a highly original spin on them. It's definitely a 10 from me!

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Shaun Cronick 16 June 2020

Thanks again Dominic glad you enjoyed it. And you are right I just pulled many threads together and weaved this ongoing series and to keep my imagination ticking over. Just wanted to deliver something a bit different for there aren't that many new dark imaginings poems out there. Thanks again and take care.

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