Saturday, August 31, 2013

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If I had to point you out in a crowd,
Designate your disguise,
I’d tell the wonderer to look amongst his peers
To find a magic man’s eyes
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Dwayne Gordon 06 November 2013

Awesome write.. I would show em the lat day of their own lives... Some of us need to look our previous day and ask ourselves, what can i do today to make it better than yesterday? Honestly, we would be better off! ! !

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Jodie Hardy 01 September 2013

powerful poem. well written and intriguing to read. xx

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Thomas Duncky 31 August 2013

Wow, this simple and short piece was intriguing. I really loved it. will read more of your pieces

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Gajanan Mishra 31 August 2013

last day of life, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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