Monday, April 6, 2009

*john Doe 3: 16 Comments

Rating: 3.0

In the Darkness
Alone
Under the investigation
Of
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Ted Sheridan
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A unique kind of poem Beautiful sharing

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G. Murdock 18 April 2009

Way to hang O' shatterer of illusion. Faith is a crutch.

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Reshma Ramesh 18 April 2009

haha! ! superb write......................

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Deva De Silva 16 April 2009

In a veiled voice you unveil a fear... blinding light darkness emptiness anxiety felt I thought it was enigmatic...

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fanniesson - 11 April 2009

Nice one, had a great roll to an outstanding ending

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Michael Gale 08 April 2009

One might ask oneself if God has really left the building? For God gave man the intelligence and hands to build that building, if nothing more than the material to build it out of. God gave man the materials and instinct to assemble, whether it be from brick or mud. Great write! God bless us all-MJG.

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Thad Wilk 06 April 2009

Gooood one Ted! Way '' To Go ''! Best regards, *10*! ! Friend Thad

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