Sunday, January 28, 2007

John Called Him Lamb (Pantoun) Comments

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We were dead in trespasses and sin.
life was full of sorrow and shame.
Hate feeling heavy and grim.
playing Satan's foolish game.
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Linda Fleming
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Joe Breunig 28 January 2007

An interesting write; we lose when 'playing Satan's foolish game'; nicely done. Maybe you would enjoy my poem called 'Nakedness of Life'. -Joe

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