Friday, March 29, 2019

Jitterbug Comments

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They were really cutting the rug.
Out on the floor doing the jitterbug.
They were dancing so good.
Their feet were moving so fast over the wood.
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Lamar Cole
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Practicing Poetess 30 March 2019

Poetry in motion. So descriptively written, you can almost feel the movement! Great job with this one, Lamar- - loved it- - made me want to jump, jive, and wail! : -)

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