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I once wrote a poem about demise
They kept looking at me
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Stunning poem Rob. Death watching you does bring so many emotions with strong impact.
Sensitive topics like death could grip any reader. So succinct yet with great impact. Very thought provoking too.
Yes. True of death but also has a broader application like the "death" of a relationship or the "demise" of sound reasoning and judgment.
All those Jiseis? Interesting. One more you write. They would only continue eyeing you
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7/23/2025 5:02:56 AM # 1.0.0
Top score for this gripping two liner.........+ to my fav