Drifting in lonely woods, butterfly saw a dragonfly shifting his home,
with contrasting names - aloofness, separateness, singleness -
Friendlessness, reclusiveness, desolateness bringing you gloom;
Solo dragon flies to all universal homes gifting you moroseness!
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Ah! The theme of lonliness, it was felt perfectly through your beautious piece of art! 'Alone I am in galaxy of stars β stretched along the night sky so high; Alone I am in universe, alone I give tongue to this verse powerful! ' Absolutely perfect lines!
I could just hear that wolf howling, :) . But, you should wait untill full moon, shouldn't you? A waxing gibbous moon is riding the lonely sky tonight. Yes, your poem... :) . Although it's the same theme of loneliness, this one really captured that emotion... :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) ! Just to cheer you up!
Beautiful rhyme/ The theme of lonliness again flshing/ Top marks! ! !
Thank you for a beautiful review ππππ