Tuesday, November 8, 2011

Jingle-Jangle! Mingle-Mangle! A Single Rat In Human Shirt Weeps In Bingle! Comments

Rating: 4.9

Drifting in lonely woods, butterfly saw a dragonfly shifting his home,
with contrasting names - aloofness, separateness, singleness -
Friendlessness, reclusiveness, desolateness bringing you gloom;
Solo dragon flies to all universal homes gifting you moroseness!
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Vipins Puthooran 05 February 2012

Beautiful rhyme/ The theme of lonliness again flshing/ Top marks! ! !

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

Thank you for a beautiful review πŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Crimson Love 09 November 2011

Ah! The theme of lonliness, it was felt perfectly through your beautious piece of art! 'Alone I am in galaxy of stars – stretched along the night sky so high; Alone I am in universe, alone I give tongue to this verse powerful! ' Absolutely perfect lines!

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

I'm grateful for your amazing review on the poem πŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

Thank you for your amazing review on the poem πŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Jacqui Broad 08 November 2011

I could just hear that wolf howling, :) . But, you should wait untill full moon, shouldn't you? A waxing gibbous moon is riding the lonely sky tonight. Yes, your poem... :) . Although it's the same theme of loneliness, this one really captured that emotion... :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) ! Just to cheer you up!

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

Thank you for your amazing review on the poem πŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘ πŸ‘

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