Do not simply diddle
For life may pass in a twinkle
Hardly any time to dawdle
In life, joy and sorrow mingle
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Very true, this life is so unpredictable that none can draw an inference to it. At the end of all this will move in it's own way. Hence............... let it ring............... with a jingle. you have no control ! ! !
This is really a beautiful poem ringing sweet in the ear. Lap up the opportunities of life, and so I take the opportunity to savour this poem.
WONDERFUL monorhyming poem that captured my heart! Enjoyed it, Valsa!
The poem appears a lovely tune from a guitar. What a wonderful musical poem.....................10
Beautifully rhyming and with deep meaning- - - What I can say- -Wow- -wonderful.
What a beautiful rhyming! And what a great message. Loved this one, Valsa-ji. You enriched my vocab. (10)
Oh, what words you have mingled Made my heart found so tickled Even had a hearty chuckle! Valsa, a great write. Great rhymes. Enjoyed it! ! Thank you.
Do not simply diddle For life may pass in a twinkle.. Beautiful composition and enjoying it with wilful mood brings us closer towards essence of each beautiful words expressed. Really very nice poem shared. Heart touching. Excellent.10.
Life is a thick jungle Crossing it's not so simple Let your walk be nimble Face it with a twinkle. Beautiful poem full of life with great rhyme. It made me juggle a little. Thank you.
Adorably cute! And very astute, Great sounds you did mingle, That made readers tingle We went you to know it, And thank you, dear Poet!
This response is amazing! The beauty lies in the fact that you could write it in the twinkle of a second! Thank you Sandra!
beautiful as always...the last line even if you are single...i feel singles enjoy more and life there rings with a jingle...lol....