Saturday, February 6, 2016

Jinggahartono Comments

Rating: 4.8

Just by sitting on this chair
I can remember our first "Hi"
Naked white board sees our memories
Grey windows feel our warmth friendship
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Kelly Kurt 06 July 2016

This style of poem is called an acrostic. Very well done, Jingga. Friendships are mysterious sometimes. They start out of the blue, evolve and sometimes fade away

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Jingga Hartono 07 July 2016

You r right Mr.Kelly too mysterious to realize that you r in a sweet friendship.. You can't throwback the time.. You just can protect it.. Thank you for reading..

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Ernest Makuakua 06 February 2016

a beautiful tactic of writing your poems i respect that for no one can steal your work we all have a way a style of how we write our poems its in every writer to have a style of writing identifying him/her. i love the piece its beautifully written thanks for such wonderful work

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