Doctor sighs
Momma cries
Jim is dead
The bullet went through his head
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Keep writing Amber! your developing your own style! great poem
all i can say his magnificent because that was a excellent poem! ! ! !
Very um... powerful (adds another 20 charcters so this is valid)
Amber! your still as true today as when i first read your works, you are a treasure' i would be proud if you were my daughter! i am still proud that you and yours take on our legacy