Friday, September 19, 2008

Jim's Story Comments

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Doctor sighs
Momma cries
Jim is dead
The bullet went through his head
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Bob Gibson 07 April 2009

Amber! your still as true today as when i first read your works, you are a treasure' i would be proud if you were my daughter! i am still proud that you and yours take on our legacy

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Bob Gibson 24 September 2008

Keep writing Amber! your developing your own style! great poem

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Sara Lane 19 September 2008

all i can say his magnificent because that was a excellent poem! ! ! !

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Jim Liu 19 September 2008

Very um... powerful (adds another 20 charcters so this is valid)

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