Tuesday, November 4, 2014

Jim, Light My Fire Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Doors playing on the stereo
Jims voice singing 'Come on baby light my fire'
Knowing eyes smile at me as I say goodbye
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Leah Ayliffe
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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 06 November 2014

heavenly voices spoken and heard in oblivion, bringing me back to something real. Very beautifully scripted with mind blowing personal expression. Nice poem on sharing.

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E Nigma 06 November 2014

Sounds like a good trip to me! Getting lost in the music and the atmosphere it creates riding on the soundwaves into an out of an imaginative dream. This prose has a deep spiritual & philosphical base to it which elevates and takes it to a new dimension. Great stuff.

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Leah Ayliffe

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