Wednesday, January 21, 2015

Jilted Comments

Rating: 4.5

I Don't feel guilty
But feel the pain
For my pure love
once more unaccepted
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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi
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Chinedu Dike 01 February 2015

Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly, its effects linger long after the source of stimulation is gone. It is whimsical and temperamental, it comes unannounced and leaves without warning. One shouldn't spend time worrying about its departure because worry won't bring it back. A nice love poem, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

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Jak Black 22 January 2015

Another sad, but well written, poem, Nalini. Jilted again? Sometimes people don't realise what they have until it's gone. I'm sure things will work out for you, eventually.

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