Jikon - April 2008 Comments
The script was well-crafted,
The main actors had rehearsed well
and smaller actors like me were expected
to just be around, to smile
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wonderful imagery and awesome insight...the ending is dramatic...Love this poem!
That's corporate angst well expressed by the typical junior/middle manager...the sensitive poet doth has much to contemplate life's functional people...the powers-that-be top management with power, disdain, pontifications, promises...targets..achievements..So, welcome Life! ! Chin up, Jasbir... Cheers. Subroto
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7/22/2025 7:50:26 PM # 1.0.0
Very poignant and meaningful. Your last lines resonate. Love, Sandra