Sunday, July 15, 2018

Jez Brul Requests: A ' Bri's Nice Life Sequel '.. [ Sequel To ‘ What A Nice Life I Have ‘; Bri's Life, Of Course! ; Poets; Long; Worth Reading ]] Comments

Rating: 5.0

"What A Nice Life I Have" was, with Jez Brul, a 'hit'.
Now she wants a sequel.So today I'll write a BIT....
.....MORE.
Perhaps two** years of marriage has passed since what first....
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Bharati Nayak 22 July 2018

I am in Bri's friend list! ! ! Thank you.

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Simone Inez Harriman 18 July 2018

Practice being good...that is so cute, Bri. No need to practice your lovely as you are. Poemhunter would be a dull site without you. Hmm...I agree every relationship needs space to rejuvenate. A little time apart undoubtedly creates fresh conversation and hopefully perspective.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 July 2018

A fascinating and honest write. BrI Edwards is a great poet who holds no iota of pretension. Enjoyed reading this real.life story.10 and onto my Poem List.

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Kelly Kurt 15 July 2018

I've been single for nearly 16 years. Don't anticipate a change in that status. That doesn't mean anyone else cannot benefit from that type of commitment.: -)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 July 2018

Then development of Jez Brul Requests: A ' Bri's Nice Life Sequel ' is definitely amazingly done here. This reminds us of why else we have a ‘nice life'. Friendship carries new hopes always to create more and more. An amazing sharing is done here...10

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Bri Edwards 15 July 2018

in the first stanza: Perhaps two** years of marriage has passed since what first..., .....has could be have, depending on whether one thinks of two** years of marriage as a whole or separate parts/years. It's the dealer's choice, and I'M THE DEALER (think of a card game in a gambling casino i think): i chose has and i'm sticking to it. ;) bri and to MyPoemList! !

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Kostas Lagos 15 July 2018

Wow! That was not just a poem.It was a Odyssey!

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