Friday, September 6, 2019

Jewels From Upanishads: 1.9 O Mind, Remember All Deeds Comments

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Now as this body's burnt to ash,
Let my life force merge with immortal air,
O mind, remember,
Remember the deeds done,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2019

This poem is really a jewel from from Upanishads which says much about body and soul. Dear Pathak sir, you have chosen a nice topic and made brilliant translation adding some extra ingredients. I appreciate this poem. Thanks for sharing and for juxtaposition of original verse.

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 September 2019

Yet I notice that except for a few poets like you the appreciation is limited as can be seen from the feedback. And there is no way of knowing how many at least read it without feedback.

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