Monday, March 19, 2012

Jewels Comments

Rating: 4.1

White diamonds sparkle in the sand
And speckle darkened skies
Green em`ralds flash in glist`ning seas
Then glint in envious eyes
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Valerie Dohren
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Josh Dinkin 21 October 2012

this one is epic. it blew my mind!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 September 2012

Wow awesome! Took me some time to find it but i was rewarded. D analogy u drew is impressive.8 *

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Constance K Yost 05 June 2012

this has lovely flow and great imagination-I enjoy it's rhythm and happiness. Constance Yost

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Patti Masterman 02 April 2012

There is a lot of artistry here. The best writers can make perplexity simple and elegant, so you scarcely see the darning needles feverishly connecting the threads..this is one of those jewels, can be read over and over and can take something new away each time..profound.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 28 March 2012

Gems are effectively beautiful, set them on platinum and gold, prettier the precious jewel, so is your poem marvel..

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Ency Bearis 26 March 2012

A gem of verses, a remarkable write.

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Dave Walker 23 March 2012

A truly beautiful poem, a wonderful write.

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Robert Green 22 March 2012

Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful

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Eric Cockrell 21 March 2012

and the greatest jewels of all... human hearts!

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Heather Wilson 21 March 2012

A beautiful poem, really a jewel, just a joy to read.

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Neela Nath Das 20 March 2012

Your poem is sparkling! Very nice!

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Danny Draper 20 March 2012

A beautiful poem, gentle and persuasive rhymes and imagery sublime.

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Smoky Hoss 19 March 2012

Perfectly wonderful, such natural beauty! Your words are always a treasure.

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