White diamonds sparkle in the sand
And speckle darkened skies
Green em`ralds flash in glist`ning seas
Then glint in envious eyes
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Wow awesome! Took me some time to find it but i was rewarded. D analogy u drew is impressive.8 *
this has lovely flow and great imagination-I enjoy it's rhythm and happiness. Constance Yost
There is a lot of artistry here. The best writers can make perplexity simple and elegant, so you scarcely see the darning needles feverishly connecting the threads..this is one of those jewels, can be read over and over and can take something new away each time..profound.
Gems are effectively beautiful, set them on platinum and gold, prettier the precious jewel, so is your poem marvel..
A beautiful poem, gentle and persuasive rhymes and imagery sublime.
Perfectly wonderful, such natural beauty! Your words are always a treasure.
this one is epic. it blew my mind!