I empty the contents of my heart
And amid its glittering treasure
You appear
in your Splendour
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yeah agreed but let me say your heart is priceless jewel...because you are realistic poet and trying to high light reality in true way...and respect for your feelings which are related to your priceless heart...10 +++++
This one is wonderfully written. Very direct words used here to display maternal-love. Keep this going. Please do write more.
Excellent! Sangeetha I too have daughters and they are really jewels.Dughters bring son-in-laws for the journey.At least we can rely on them once we say good bye to life!
Jewel of my heart, nice show of feelings, nice poem.
A well articulated piece from the inner recesses of the heart. I like the way you captured the essence of the poem - the love for your daughter. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.