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A very very very good poem.

and it is good, a way of letting life out of the box, uncapping the bottle to let the effervescence gush through the narrow, usually constricted neck. This stanga is very amazing

Good job, this poem.is enjoyable and is rich in vocabulary

Nicely written. Words that flowed Patricia

There's a lot under the surface of your poems. I like them all although I'm more an iambic pentameter man myself. I rhyme all the time and use assonance once or twice a year Let's have more