Tuesday, January 27, 2015

Jesus! Please Come Back Comments

Rating: 4.9

Jesus! You are needed once again,
The world is sick,
Besides old diseases like leprosy,
Many new diseases are spread on the earth.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Salini Nair 03 February 2015

gret write...like it

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Tushar Ray 28 January 2015

Passionate expression, very appealing, we need your love once again before the tears are frozen and see another ice age. A moving poem indeed! Thank you poet Akhtar Jawad, for sharing this timely poem

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Rajesh Thankappan 28 January 2015

Kiss our souls and make us conscious. Very aptly said. A beauty of a poem. Man has to be awakened from the stupor he has fallen into. This single line captures the helplessness of our times.

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Valsa George 27 January 2015

We suffer from ailments of many sort.... mental and physical! We need a great physician to heal the sickness of the world! Jesus travelled around to heal the sick and many got cured by his healing touch! Greatly enjoyed the poem especially the last stanza!

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Khalid Saifullah 27 January 2015

A great message in response to a call of humanity...............10

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 January 2015

Beautiful poem. Very true said in few lines...... Jesus! We need you once again, We have forgotten your lessons, To be kind and helpful to those who suffer, From a sickness physical or mental! Very true said, we all need blessings from our Lord. Beautiful message. Loved reading it.

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Spock The Vegan 27 January 2015

Very Nice. I give you a 10.

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